Comment from damommy

Excellent

Another good chapter in a terrific story. I can hardly wait for Veronica to go back. Hopefully, she will have found more about Jacob Argall.

I enjoy hearing from the 'powers that be,' too.

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017

She has a lot of researching to do to find out where Jacob moved on to. But, the ever resourceful Veronica might discover something to help her move on. :) Thank you so much, Yvonne, for another of your encouraging reviews. You always lift my confidence. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx

Comment from Ulla

Exceptional

Hi Sandra, oh I love this story, and this chapter as always was so well written. So Veronica is yet again back in her own time, but I have a feeling it won't last long before she's back in time to sort out the problems.
James and Mildred were sat in the sitting-room = James and Mildred sat in the sitting-room
I just can't wait reading on. Hugs from here. Ulla xxxxx

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017

Biggest ever thank you's, my dear Ulla, for the wonderful review and all those shiny stars!!!! You are so kind, my friend. Next part is being worked on now. Big hugs, my friend! :) Sandra xx

reply by Ulla on 14-Dec-2017

I'm looking forward to it! xx

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Don't apologise for the length I always enjoy every minute and word of you outstanding work! This as always has a bit of everything and makes the reading of it very enjoyable there is realism but it is also highly entertaining. You are a great talent and I will always enjoy reading your work, this is a great story and nice I have to say to see the U.K English lol as a fellow brit. Well done as always Kind regards Meia xx

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2017

Thank you so much, Meia, for another really lovely review!! I have to mention the UK English, because some of our spellings are different. So nice to meet another UK Fanstorian. :) Big hugs, my friend. :) sandra xx

Comment from Ferkit

Excellent

I didn't notice any errors. But my family is originally from the UK so what may be normal for me may not be for others.

I really like the story. Well written. Peaked my interest.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017

Thank you so much for reading my story. Where do you live now? I'm really pleased you enjoyed this part. :) Sandra x

reply by Ferkit on 13-Dec-2017

I'm in Ecuador now. I moved here four years ago.

Comment from JDRBAR

Excellent

As far as I'm concerned, your chapters are never nearly long enough, LOL. I'm always delighted to see a new chapter listed. If there are nits I don't see them.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017

Bless you, thank you so much, my friend. It's so nice to know that you really enjoy reading my story. Thank you!! :) Sandra xxx

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is coming along nicely. You are managing to juggle the different scenes and times very well without losing the reader.
I like the diversity of jumping around, it keeps things interesting.
Sharon

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017

Thank you, Sharon! That is so nice of you to say that. Thank you for this lovely review, my friend.:) Sandra xx

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I wonder if Veronica will get to meet her almost "puppeteer" clansmen Sandra? But great episode, as always. She's returned to her time, to Mildred's relief, seemingly no time is lost. Later that night she tells James about Gwendolyn and her affair and tragic circumstance with Jacob, so they resolve to find out his records in the archives in Cornwall, excellent story Sandra, well done, good job, blessings, Roy

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 Comment Written 13-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017

Thank you so much, Roy, for another fabulous review. Will Veronica meet them? Hmm, they haven't shared that knowledge with me yet. But you just never know. :)) Big hugs, my dear friend. :) Sandra xxx

reply by royowen on 14-Dec-2017

Well done

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

So it seems all is transpiring according to plan from the controllers. Nice instalment once again.

Michael said as he tugged on James sleeve - need to denote the possession in here.

Ann, shook her head with big sister superiority - no need for the comma here.

And if you eat these up without any messin', I've got some of my fairy cakes waiting in the kitchen...' - need opening speech marks here.

Apparantly, he was given it by the missionary's - Apparently / missionaries.

because he looked at me with a quizzical look. - you could try to avoid the repetition of looked/look here. maybe something like '... given his quizzical look.'



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 Comment Written 13-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017

I'm so pleased you reviewed me first, Gareth!! Thank you so very much for pointing out my errors. I quickly went in and made the corrections. Sometimes they are just so silly, it's embarrassing! I'm going to sue my teacher, (if she's still alive, of course, lol.)
I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story, my friend. Thanks again. :) Sandra xx