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THE TRINING Book Three

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JOURNEY INTO REDEMPTION

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Comment from Sankey
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Good work old mate. The other story is good too but glad old Doctrex is back again. No spags and good reading. Hope you have a great Christmas. Gonna promote my Christmas Carols again. Cheers.

 Comment Written 24-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
    Thanks, Geoff. I'm glad to have you back to fantasy land. These chapters will be few and far between since they have to be rewritten from scratch. Have a Merry Christmas.
reply by Sankey on 24-Dec-2014
    Ahh I forgot you lost everything right? Have a look at my Really Truly, Christmas Carols if you haven't already was gonna promote then but they are already recognized so thought save my member dollars hehe.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
    Hey, Scrooge! Promote those carols. Tis the season to be promoted and raise it to the All Time Best status! LOL, I'll have to wait until tomorrow, friend. I have to get to bed and ready for a half-day of work tomorrow.
reply by Sankey on 24-Dec-2014
    OK I am on IE Browser to see if the sound works on here I have a new Media player for Google Chrome for my side but just wanna check then I WILL PROMOTE! I wanna get the message out!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
    Let me know. I didn't want to bully you!
reply by Sankey on 24-Dec-2014
    Na good idea I just bought a book balloon will put up the latest carol as the head of the promotion "He Came to Die For Us!"
reply by Sankey on 24-Dec-2014
    They are up now thanks for giving me the encouragement to do it. Now go read and hope you can all hear the music should work ok on IE Browser.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
    Will do.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
    I don't understand why it's not on my queue? I even checked to see if you are still shown as being followed by me. and you are. I'll have to go to your profile.
reply by Sankey on 24-Dec-2014
    I get really mad when that happens also people I really like to read I don't get notices of new listings of theirs yours are ok though. Can get the link for you if you want.
Comment from country ranch writer
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doesn't sound good with what is happening with Jed he is such pain he may never pull out of it it is a tough call for anyone to make

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 Comment Written 23-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
    Yes, he's in a world of hurt. And he also has something he needs to tell Doctrex.
reply by country ranch writer on 24-Dec-2014
    hum
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
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Hi,

Whoohooo, I'm glad Doctrex is back, and if I had a sixer left, I'd shower it on ya. Just gave my last one this morning.

I wonder if Jed is gonna make it since Garvin wants to talk to Doctrex. That's never a good sign.

Good, good chapter. Back attcha soon.

~ Typo ~
"Unguent(,)" He nodded.

*Season's Greetings*

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)



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 Comment Written 23-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 24-Dec-2014
    I'll take the virtual one, my dear Jax! Blessings to you as well.
Comment from amahra
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Whew! LOL! I'm so glad to see this story again. I had not read you for a while. When I saw the new story posted, I thought I had missed the ending of this one.

I really like this chapter; your writing is very sympathetic towards your characters with lots of believability to in this scene. The stinky wound was very realistic and funny.

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2014


reply by the author on 23-Dec-2014
    Bless you, Ama! What a Christmas Gift. My first 6 for this chapter. I'm thrilled you liked it. Thank you my dear friend.