Comment from
kimdebfred
your work is always good. I could learn from you. I like the your sentences perfectly connect with each other to make the story understandable. I have read work that was not clear and I had no understanding of what it was saying. but I like your writing. must have been writing for years. very good.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2014
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2014
55 years, but who's counting, Kim. Those are sure complimentary words and are much appreciated. LOL, of course the 6 stars ain't chopped liver! Starting with the next chapter we are getting more into the Fantasy Adventure part. Hope to have you and your sisters there reading it.
reply by kimdebfred on 02-Nov-2014