THE TRINING Book Three
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "THE POMNOT: REVISITED ( Pt 2)"JOURNEY INTO REDEMPTION
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Comment from c_lucas
Is this a new type of warrior, or what. Why is the reader here??? You post is well written with good dialogue. I didn't see any errors.
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Is this a new type of warrior, or what. Why is the reader here??? You post is well written with good dialogue. I didn't see any errors.
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Charlie. Appreciate the read.
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You're welcome, Jay. Charlie
Comment from marijmd
No, he smelled this bad the day we brought him in - yuck that must be quite the smell!!
About three-sixty. - Missing ""
"I think we can all use some fresh air," I said. -I'll bet!
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No, he smelled this bad the day we brought him in - yuck that must be quite the smell!!
About three-sixty. - Missing ""
"I think we can all use some fresh air," I said. -I'll bet!
Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Thanks, Maria. I made the corrections. Appreciate your pointing them out to me. BTW, when can I expect another offering from you?
Comment from royowen
Wow, the size of the Pomnot, much bigger than any of them! I am surprised that this is what they're fighting, more intelligent soldiers you would think, would think would have a superiority to their larger enemy, except maybe, in hand to hand combat, well done Jay, good yarning. Blessings, Roy,
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Wow, the size of the Pomnot, much bigger than any of them! I am surprised that this is what they're fighting, more intelligent soldiers you would think, would think would have a superiority to their larger enemy, except maybe, in hand to hand combat, well done Jay, good yarning. Blessings, Roy,
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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Clearly, Glnot Rhuether USES the pomnot as an expendable. What makes them so frightening, though, is they just keep plodding forward ... I would think many of today's fantasy readers would identify them with the walking dead.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
The Pomnot sounds a lot like my 21 year old son. He's 6'5" and weighs well over 300 pound and doesn't like to shave. I enjoyed reading your post.
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The Pomnot sounds a lot like my 21 year old son. He's 6'5" and weighs well over 300 pound and doesn't like to shave. I enjoyed reading your post.
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Comment Written 05-Oct-2014
reply by the author on 05-Oct-2014
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You're funny, Barbara. If you tell me he looks like the picture, he's got a real problem. Thanks for the kind rating. That's the shortest post I've ever had. It was supposed to be a second scene for the Zurn post, but I couldn't justify the length.
