Comment from Miss Laurie

Excellent

I found no other corrections one small one:

swallowed several time-simply needs and 's' at the end of time..big deal, huh? Great job.

Exciting content. Is this for real? Is anyone truly working on something like this? Something we need terribly?

Thank you, it was nice to have some hope, even if it's a long way to fruition.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2008

Hey Laurie,

Thanks for the wonderful comments and your input. You wouldn't believe how many countries are working in this area. I'm about 10/15 years ahead of the game, but the technology is already in place.

Thanks and I got that S in there, thanks!

Gayle

Comment from AbigailDavid

Excellent

Hello Gayle, i did enjoy this well written chapter of your novel. So well written, and Andy is a strong character. Your descriptions and realistic dialogue engage the reader. I have read a bit of your story now, and always enjoy catching up with this ineteresting narrative and its characters.

Also, the author note is duly noted, hehehee

Bye for now, and thanks for sharing your writing, Abby

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2008

Hi Abby,

So nice to see you again! This is a strange chapter to come into on this novel, as it's the first dealing with this subject. If you get the chance, skim the earlier chapters so you can catch up.

Thanks for the wonderful comments,
Gayle

Comment from Korton

Excellent

Although this is quite a departure from the previous chapters, it adds a new dimension to the story and explains the international component, relative to the kidnappers. Very well done.

"The references here to H[e]-3, helium-3
Working round the clock in three (hour) shifts

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 Comment Written 27-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 27-Jul-2008

Hey Frank,

Thanks for the kind comments and support. Okay, what do you mean with regards to...Working round the clock in three (hour) shifts. I meant 3 eight hour shifts! Yikes did I mess that up. Will check, my friend.

Thanks so much,
Gayle