Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "Revenge - Chap 10"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
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Comment from tfawcus
I haven't been following this but thought I'd drop by for a look. You certainly make your readers drool over the patisserie! Just reading the description made me loosen my belt a notch!
You have an easy way with dialogue. It flows naturally and progresses the plot.
Enjoyed.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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I haven't been following this but thought I'd drop by for a look. You certainly make your readers drool over the patisserie! Just reading the description made me loosen my belt a notch!
You have an easy way with dialogue. It flows naturally and progresses the plot.
Enjoyed.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review and for stopping by to read this chapter. i hope I entertained you enough to bring you back for more. Hugs, Carol
