Living On The Edge
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Living On The Edge - Chap 16"The blending of good and evil.
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Comment from LJbutterfly
I enjoy all the details you include in each chapter, like the barista apologizing for being late, and the horrible conditions of Layla's holding cell.
I loved seeing how much of a fighter Layla is. She didn't understand all the pieces involved in the case, but she knew Harrison was lying about everything.
Now, who is in Harrison's office. Could it be Garth Woodman?
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I enjoy all the details you include in each chapter, like the barista apologizing for being late, and the horrible conditions of Layla's holding cell.
I loved seeing how much of a fighter Layla is. She didn't understand all the pieces involved in the case, but she knew Harrison was lying about everything.
Now, who is in Harrison's office. Could it be Garth Woodman?
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Lorraine
It's extremely nice to know that the reader notices the little things and doesn't just skim the chapter for he basics. Thank you for telling me that you enjoyed it. Layla was overwhelmed at first but she didn't give up and when Harrison started badgering her, she fought back. Go Layla!
Now it's time to drop the hatchet on Ole Harrison. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from patcelaw
This is another very exciting chapter for your book and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with the book and I wish you a very good weekend. May you be blessed beyond measure. Patricia .
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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This is another very exciting chapter for your book and I enjoyed listening to it very much. I wish you the very best with the book and I wish you a very good weekend. May you be blessed beyond measure. Patricia .
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter and I thank you for the review. Hope you have a nice weekend.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I think whoever's in the interrogation won't please Harrsisn, the crooked policeman is about to get his I fear, the killing of the police officer was indeed.self defence, and Allie is safe, I think things are about to unravel for some, well done Carol, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I think whoever's in the interrogation won't please Harrsisn, the crooked policeman is about to get his I fear, the killing of the police officer was indeed.self defence, and Allie is safe, I think things are about to unravel for some, well done Carol, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I believe you just might be on to something, Roy! Everyone is waiting to give him the boot and he'll get exactly what he has coming. Hurrah!
Smiles, Carol
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Well done
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Thank you!
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Well done
Comment from BethShelby
It looks like things aren't going so will for William. I don't know who is in his office but I hope it is Garth. He wouldn't be expecting the FBI to show up. I seem to have forgotten what has happened to the missing that DNA evidence planted. There should be a way to get the real DNA and prove it isn't Alyssa. I'm glad Layla is speaking up for herself and telling William off. I'm enjoying it.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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It looks like things aren't going so will for William. I don't know who is in his office but I hope it is Garth. He wouldn't be expecting the FBI to show up. I seem to have forgotten what has happened to the missing that DNA evidence planted. There should be a way to get the real DNA and prove it isn't Alyssa. I'm glad Layla is speaking up for herself and telling William off. I'm enjoying it.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Alyssa is alive and well so as soon as she steps forward, they will have her DNA. Layla was overwhelmed for a bit but no she's ready to fight the Chief. He's about to go down. LOL
Smiles. Carol
Comment from karenina
Oh, I just love to see the composure and control crumbling all around this egomaniac, Harrison. He's woven quite an evil web of deceit, and something tells me it won't be long before he's inexorably trapped.
Layla has a spicy flavor of guts and a real spine! Hah. It won't be long now...............
Karenina
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Oh, I just love to see the composure and control crumbling all around this egomaniac, Harrison. He's woven quite an evil web of deceit, and something tells me it won't be long before he's inexorably trapped.
Layla has a spicy flavor of guts and a real spine! Hah. It won't be long now...............
Karenina
Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Things are about to go Pop! in the Chief's face and he won't know what hit him. Glad you enjoyed this one. I wasn't sure how the interrogation would go.
smiles, Carol
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Perfect! Layla didn't fold as he expected. (Never underestimate a woman, right?)
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That's right! He thought she was a pretty face from New York and she'd back down. She was frightened at first but she found her strength and gave it too him!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm hoping that man in Harrison's office is Garth and he's going to put his jerk in his place. I can't wait until they rescue Layla and Allyssa gets her memory back.
He tried again. "Cat got your tongue? (again,)
After removing the handcuffs, he smirked at Layla, "Are you comfy now?" (Layla.)
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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I'm hoping that man in Harrison's office is Garth and he's going to put his jerk in his place. I can't wait until they rescue Layla and Allyssa gets her memory back.
He tried again. "Cat got your tongue? (again,)
After removing the handcuffs, he smirked at Layla, "Are you comfy now?" (Layla.)
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Things are just about ready to go Pop! in Harrison's face. He thinks he's so tough but he's got a lot to account for this time. And I hope I've got all the right people to set him straight. We're almost there!
Smiles, Carol
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I'm sure you have.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Carol, you are doing a good job with this ego-manic Chief of Police. You have slowly introduced him, and with each new layer of his personality, we like him less and less. Nice work. Terry.
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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Carol, you are doing a good job with this ego-manic Chief of Police. You have slowly introduced him, and with each new layer of his personality, we like him less and less. Nice work. Terry.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2024
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Thank you, Terry. I am glad that his character came across as I hoped. He's losing control, but I believe his days are numbers. Thanks for the kind words and review.
Smiles, Carol
