Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

This 5-7-5 poem I think is a contender in this contest.

It tells a story. The title planted a visual in my mind and the poem redirected it.

Great last line : A Reservation

Best of luck,
John

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thanks so much, John!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Clever, imaginative and a fun haiku! The image is perfect and the words spring a surprise which is always enjoyable. A lovely verse which could equally fit into the 'poem in a pocket category'. Well done and good luck! Think it's a strong contender. Take care, Debbie

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Debbie!