Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Revenge - Chap 28"Evil stalks the dynamic crime team
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Comment from LJbutterfly
Wow, Carol. You really know how to weave an action packed mystery. You could easily write for "Law And Order," or any other detective TV show. You would have been great for "Columbo," with Peter Falk, back in 1968.
Again, I couldn't read this episode fast enough. I'm totally entertained.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Wow, Carol. You really know how to weave an action packed mystery. You could easily write for "Law And Order," or any other detective TV show. You would have been great for "Columbo," with Peter Falk, back in 1968.
Again, I couldn't read this episode fast enough. I'm totally entertained.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
Samantha endeavours to get in touch with Marian but can't and figures that she must be in a place where she can't receive phone calls. They are both unofficially investigating the case of Vince Moretti, and trying to coordinate the case together, but can't go busting in, else they do it illegally. Beautifully written Carol, things are hotting Up, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Samantha endeavours to get in touch with Marian but can't and figures that she must be in a place where she can't receive phone calls. They are both unofficially investigating the case of Vince Moretti, and trying to coordinate the case together, but can't go busting in, else they do it illegally. Beautifully written Carol, things are hotting Up, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
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You too Carol
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Love it, and am learning from it for my own efforts. I am woefully inept at character lists and appreciate learning the best way from yours. You are very talented at keeping your story in a straight line so any level reader can keep up. I really enjoyed this chapter, my sweet friend!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Love it, and am learning from it for my own efforts. I am woefully inept at character lists and appreciate learning the best way from yours. You are very talented at keeping your story in a straight line so any level reader can keep up. I really enjoyed this chapter, my sweet friend!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
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My pleasure!
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My pleasure!!
Comment from BethShelby
I hope Samantha will be able to work her plan. It seems to be hard to keep Allie in check. Things are moving too slowly for her because she thinks her sister's life is as stake, and it probably is if they act to quickly. I love that you've tied these two cases together and hopefully they will be solved at the same time.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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I hope Samantha will be able to work her plan. It seems to be hard to keep Allie in check. Things are moving too slowly for her because she thinks her sister's life is as stake, and it probably is if they act to quickly. I love that you've tied these two cases together and hopefully they will be solved at the same time.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Thanks for getting us all up to speed and better understanding the two situations, Carol. Emotions are running high and we're all waiting with held breath to hear what Samantha's plan is. Fabulous chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thanks for getting us all up to speed and better understanding the two situations, Carol. Emotions are running high and we're all waiting with held breath to hear what Samantha's plan is. Fabulous chapter.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Wow. They are putting things together finally. But I worry about Marian and Tiffany and hope they are safe. Now Samantha is in charge. That's great.
Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Wow. They are putting things together finally. But I worry about Marian and Tiffany and hope they are safe. Now Samantha is in charge. That's great.
Well done.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
The Mystery and Crime Fiction, Chapter 28 in the book Revenge, speaks the mystery - are the pieces falling into place, about revenge; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, write more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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The Mystery and Crime Fiction, Chapter 28 in the book Revenge, speaks the mystery - are the pieces falling into place, about revenge; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, write more, fast, time is limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123600/N21. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reading, commenting with a review, and for enjoying my story. I appreciate your time and thoughts. Have a great day!
Hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I sure hope this plan works. Of course, we're not entirely sure what it is, but if it needs tweaking, I'm sure Garth will do it. I can't wait for the next part. I am worried about Marian. Her and Tiffany need to be okay.
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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I sure hope this plan works. Of course, we're not entirely sure what it is, but if it needs tweaking, I'm sure Garth will do it. I can't wait for the next part. I am worried about Marian. Her and Tiffany need to be okay.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Hello, Barbara.... how's the wrist coming along?
things are about to get explosive on every side.... Thanks for staying with me throughout this story.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was a well written and enjoyable chapter. Your strengths are when you are showing. Your use of dialogue is excellent and this especially works well in the second half. A little heavy on telling in the first half. But overall a well written and enjoyable chapter.
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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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I thought this was a well written and enjoyable chapter. Your strengths are when you are showing. Your use of dialogue is excellent and this especially works well in the second half. A little heavy on telling in the first half. But overall a well written and enjoyable chapter.
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your time and review. I appreciate it very much. I usually have more dialogue in my chapters but this one needed to remind the readers of things which had happened earlier.
Smiles, Carol
