Revenge
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Comment from lyenochka
Poor Garth to have to share that horrible information and Allie came at him like little attack dog. I was hoping she would have noticed how hard it was for him and listened. But that's just my impression but I think you are keeping more in character of Allie's personality.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Poor Garth to have to share that horrible information and Allie came at him like little attack dog. I was hoping she would have noticed how hard it was for him and listened. But that's just my impression but I think you are keeping more in character of Allie's personality.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Patty Palmer
Poor Allie! She has sure gone through a lot lately between going to prison in the last book to protect their suspect and getting beat up badly. Now she's been told they thik her sister was murdered! Great job!!
xxoo Patty
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Poor Allie! She has sure gone through a lot lately between going to prison in the last book to protect their suspect and getting beat up badly. Now she's been told they thik her sister was murdered! Great job!!
xxoo Patty
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Begin Again this chapter in your book Running Blind
First thank you for the font, its a perfect size.
I like Garth and his gentle feeling toward Allie while Garth is finding information about the death of Allies sister death,
I found very emontial
Gert
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Begin Again this chapter in your book Running Blind
First thank you for the font, its a perfect size.
I like Garth and his gentle feeling toward Allie while Garth is finding information about the death of Allies sister death,
I found very emontial
Gert
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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You are Most welcome
Begin Again
Gert
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You are most welcome
Begin Again
Gert
Comment from Wendy G
Let's hope that she can see that it wasn't her sister (maybe by the tattoo although she would not necessarily know that for sure.) This one is not an easy read as we can sense the pain and distress in each. But therefore it's realistic and authentic and well written!
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Let's hope that she can see that it wasn't her sister (maybe by the tattoo although she would not necessarily know that for sure.) This one is not an easy read as we can sense the pain and distress in each. But therefore it's realistic and authentic and well written!
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from BethShelby
I'm sure Allie would devastated at the point. You are doing a good job of showing that. I'm anxious to find out if she will believe it is her sister after seeing the body.
Beth
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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I'm sure Allie would devastated at the point. You are doing a good job of showing that. I'm anxious to find out if she will believe it is her sister after seeing the body.
Beth
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Heartrending--torturous build-up to the delivery of the devastating news--excruciating to contemplate Garth's position--you rendered his torment--and Allie's perfectly.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Heartrending--torturous build-up to the delivery of the devastating news--excruciating to contemplate Garth's position--you rendered his torment--and Allie's perfectly.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You did a perfect job keeping Garth tough, you can't lose that, and showing he can be tender for somebody he loves. This is good writing. I applaud you. In my next novel, I'm writing a scene that's buffaloing me. I need to make my readers feel the pain.
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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You did a perfect job keeping Garth tough, you can't lose that, and showing he can be tender for somebody he loves. This is good writing. I applaud you. In my next novel, I'm writing a scene that's buffaloing me. I need to make my readers feel the pain.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from royowen
That's how much a man should love his wife, wanting to protect her no matter, but the poor girl is facing the worst thing a human being can face, the loss of a close loved under the most heinous situation. Loved this episode, it must have taken a lot to write it, but your bravery is beyond question. Well done, an excellent post. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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That's how much a man should love his wife, wanting to protect her no matter, but the poor girl is facing the worst thing a human being can face, the loss of a close loved under the most heinous situation. Loved this episode, it must have taken a lot to write it, but your bravery is beyond question. Well done, an excellent post. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read, enjoy and review my story. It means a great deal to me and I truly appreciate it.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Good. The dead body was linked to the murder victim Jaz. It made Allie very sad. Are Jaz and Allie best friends? I wonder what else is coming.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Good. The dead body was linked to the murder victim Jaz. It made Allie very sad. Are Jaz and Allie best friends? I wonder what else is coming.
Well done.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Jaz is Allie's younger sister. The ex-con Vito wants revenge on Allie and has found a scheme including her sister. Thanks for reading and following the story.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
Well that didn't take long! This is another one to tug at the heart strings, Carol. You do the chatter of Allie so well, I felt Garth's frustration and wanted to yell at her to shut up! Do you know someone like that? Great chapter.
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reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Well that didn't take long! This is another one to tug at the heart strings, Carol. You do the chatter of Allie so well, I felt Garth's frustration and wanted to yell at her to shut up! Do you know someone like that? Great chapter.
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Comment Written 17-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 17-Oct-2021
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Yes, I actually do and often I want to just scream shut up so I could relate to Allie's chattering a lot. Thanks for the review. have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
