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An emotional true story of Babe Ruth.
Senryu (his will prevails) by Lance S. Loria
Senryu Poetry writing prompt entry

Babe is up to bat
Points to centerfield, then swings
Whack and fans go wild


Writing Prompt
Write a senryu. Unrhymed Japanese verse of 5/7/5 syllables. Using human emotion.

Author Notes
Babe refers to Babe Ruth, a Yankee (NYY) baseball great from the 1930s. This poem refers to a true story.

This happened on October 1, 1932 in Game 3 of the World Series. Babe was at bat with 2 strikes and 2 balls. Babe pointed his bat to the 440 foot centerfield while Cubs players and fans heckled him. On the next pitch he hit a whopping 500 foot homer. The Yankees swept the series 4-0.

When Yankee Stadium was built, Babe hit the first homer during the home opening game on 4/18/23. The ballpark was called The house that Ruth built.

He also hit 3 homers in Game 4 of the 1926 World Series. He hit the first ever homer in an All-Star game on 7/6/33. He batted 100 (4 for 4) including 3 homers on 5/24/35. Babe played 22 seasons (1914-1935). He was a 12 time American League home run leader and played in 7 World Series. He had 714 career home runs, 2,213 RBIs, 2,062 bases on balls (forced walks), and his on base slugging record of 1.164% still stands today.

George Herman Ruth, Jr. was one of the five original inductees in the Baseball Hall of Fame in 1936.

     

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