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Hopes of dreams coming true
Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
: Dreams Unfold by JLR
Artwork by cleo85 at FanArtReview.com

Dreams unfold casting nets at distant stars!
Grasping glittering hopes to fill our souls.
Harvest of hopes sliding alongside Mars,
dreams unfold casting nets at distant stars!
A sprinkling of stardust healing life's scars
while into Eden's lush garden, we stroll.
Dreams unfold casting nets at distant stars
grasping glittering hopes to fill our souls.

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Author Notes
My First work with the poetic style A Triolet:
A Triolet is a poetic form consisting of only 8 lines. Within a Triolet, the 1st, 4th, and 7th lines repeat, and the 2nd and 8th lines do as well. The rhyme scheme is simple: ABaAabAB, to make writing this Triolet more challenging, this is written in pentameter (English version) where each line only has 10 syllables (5 metrical feet).

Thanks for the use of "Wishing upon a Star," by cleo85 on FanArtReview.com

     

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