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How many falling stars have you seen in your lifetime?
Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
: Falling Jewels by JLR

Jewels shine brightly,
stars beaming nightly.
Beads tarnish, turn dull.
stars from sky fall.
Golden ring gleams,
moonstone beams.
Diamonds
Sapphire
Topaz
Pearl
each
one
shine
glow
gleam
flare
But the stars that fall go dark.

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Author Notes
Candlelight Poetry--week of 12-20-2019
The challenge this week--Candlelight ( does NOT have to be about candles, light, etc. can be about ANYTHING). Author's choice of topic. ***17 lines ***centered on page ***syllabic as follows: 5-5-5-4-4-3-2-2-2-1-1-1-1-1-1-1-7 ***Rhyme scheme: aabbccxxxxxxxxxxx (x is UNRHYMED)

The light of the star lit sky sparkles, beams. gleams and then when a stars life ends it just goes dark.

My sincere thanks for the use of this by Photo by Phil Botha on Unsplash

     

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