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Judas Blue by mrgrunty

You come to me with promises

of feelings that I seek

You comfort me and seal the deal

a kiss upon my cheek



Assurances of sunny days

if I'll just let you in

A contract written with my hope

that here the good guys win



I bet on you for tenderness

for comfort and a friend

You kissed my cheek and left me here

with nothing in the end



Your answer was to poison me

to put to sleep and numb

A zombie lives now in this shell

yet only seen by some



The darkness like a siren's call

so easily choose you

I'm writing you a letter mate

I hate you Judas Blue


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