Ah!
Am struck by a thunderbolt of pleasure.
As it runs through me, my hairs stand on their roots
A look of expectancy, visible on my face
Ah! I am in a state of frenzy
And comprehension is beyond me
As the charge "earths" itself through my body...
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Author Notes
The poem centers on the profound experience of orgasm, capturing the physical, emotional, and psychological aspects of this intense moment of pleasure. It deliberately avoids specific details about the who, what, where, and when, instead focusing on the universal and profound nature of the experience. The primary purpose of the poem is to thoroughly explore and convey the overwhelming sensations and emotions accompanying the moment of climax.
The language in the poem is vivid and intense, strategically using words like "thunderbolt," "frenzy," and "charge" to convey the robust nature of the experience. By using the word "earth" as a verb to describe the sensation grounding itself in the body, the poem adds depth and complexity to the language.
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