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Consequences by Janet Foor
Write A Sonnet writing prompt entry
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No comfort for my tired and broken heart
As tears flow down across this wrinkled face
A failure not forgiven from the start
Compassion passes by without a trace.

Long years of unforgiveness for my sin
No kindness to be shown the likes of me
I'm seeking trust I know I cannot win

I'm lost upon this deep and brackish sea.

Yet, life's not over till I've breathed my last
Reflecting shameful sins I still recall
There's time for introspection unsurpassed
To pray for peace and mercy meant for all.

My brokenness released into the light.
On wings of His forgiveness, I'll take flight.


Writing Prompt
Write a sonnet. A sonnet is a poem of 14 lines. It follows a strict rhyme scheme. It is often about love. Instructions and examples.

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