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ABAB Rhymed Poem
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: The Universe by Treischel

The Universe
(ABAB Ryhmed Poem)




When I look upon stars
Whether planets, like Mars,
Or the billions of suns,
As the Universe runs,
I am filled with awe.
The conclusion I draw:
Too vast to comprehend.
I begin in the end
Feeling how really small
We are amidst it all.



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Author Notes
It just so large!

ABAB rhymed in 10 lines, Syllable count 6.

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