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a Tuscan Strombata Poem
Commentary and Philosophy
: Freedom's Price by Treischel


Freedom's Price



When dreary death treads on fallow fields of woe,
Where life is savored sweetly as souls survive.
As wounds are bound, and the winds of victory blow,
Battlefields are slowly cleared by those alive.
We grieve for those lost, whose sacrifice was made
For freedom freely given as prices paid.
We much too often take these things for granted,
Forgetting how dear freedom's seeds were planted.




Author Notes
Freedom is not Free. Fourth of July, Memorial Day, and Veteran's Day are more than just days off, to play.

This poem is a Tuscan Strombata.
Tuscan Strombata
...4 couplets, 11 syllables per line, ababccdd rhyming.

Thank you for this wonderful patriotic art piece, Price of Independence by donkeyoatey at FanArt Review.com.

     

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