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The folly of
My Life in words
: Adam and Eve. by Jaq Cee
Spiritual writing prompt entry



When God said to Adam, "here's your wife"
He didn't count on too much strife
but Eve was fooled by a snake
forbidden fruit she'd take
only one measly bite
it took to end
their delight
now their
plight
Is
in the
dimming light
of wild and lakes
fending off all snakes
no more help was offered
a harsh new life was proffered
a world of sin they'd now grapple
'thus poor Eve 'bitin' - tempting apple





Writing Prompt
Write a poem of any type that is spiritual in nature

Author Notes
'bitin' is a play on words of 'bit in' and ' bitten'

     

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