FanStory.com - Who will weep?by Jaq Cee
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Everyone needs to know they've done enough.
My Life in words
: Who will weep? by Jaq Cee

As the days
darkness dims
on a life
nearly spent
Lack-lustre thoughts crowd my mind

What have I left?
What is my legacy?

Will anyone weep at my grave?

Looking back through life's album
to the times I can recall

I did my best.
But was it enough?

The question still remains.

Will anyone weep at my grave?

Author Notes
Couldn't sleep last night and jotted this down.

Free verse, intentional lack of punctuation. Just trying things to see how they look. All critique greatly appreciated.

     

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