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CSP: A Collection of Poems
: Our Flame by Sixteezkid



While in our youth, the passion stayed afire
No hour could pass without an "I love you"
A brushing touch could strengthen our desire
And just a glance was all it took--we knew

As years went by our busy lives were blessed
With many children, all our love now shared
Another hectic day; we need our rest
A kiss good night with tenderness declared

We lie before the fire; and embers glow
Contentment now, we've raised the darlings well
Undying love between us--we still know
Devotion and companionship does dwell

The flame was lit the moment we caught eyes
And burning still; our constant life's reprise


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Author Notes
Writing Prompt
An English sonnet:
Consists of three quatrains plus a finishing couplet; total fourteen lines. SINGLE sonnets only please.

Write a submission based on the above prompt.

There must be a rhyme scheme here of ABAB, CDCD, EFEF, GG.
MUST be written in iambic pentameter ('da-DUM' beats) Ten syllables each line with NO 'silent' sylables. Entries that do not follow this criteria will be disqualified.

     

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