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Syllables 1-5-5-9 for each stanza
Breaking Out by Debi Pick Marquette


War

Locked behind a door

Can’t take any more

I am planning to even the score



Fear

I don't like it here

 My mind they will clear
 
I can hear the footsteps as they near



Raid

The nurse is afraid

Guards came to her aide 

When I start to act out my charade



Pray

They will make me pay

In chamber I'll stay

 ‘Cause they’re coming to take me away
 
 
 

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THEY ARE COMING TO TAKE ME AWAY

This week's POETRY writing prompt has a topic of ABANDONED ASYLUM. Write a four line poem about this topic using your own picture. A four line poem contains the syllables 1-5-5-9. You may do multiple stanzas if you like. Let's have some fun!

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I wrote this for the humor. When I saw the prompt, I had this song in my head the whole time and thought it would make a hilarious take on the video. I was pretty sure it would not offend anyone since these type of asylums have been shut down for many years.

     

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