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Modified Loop Poem - Free Verse
2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
: Rain Clouds by Gypsy Blue Rose
The presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/5/24

 
clouds drip drop rain

rain falls on the creeks

creeks rush into the rivers

rivers plunge into the sea

sea's vapor turns to clouds

     clouds wander over the ocean —

ocean in a drop

drop on the child's face

face looking up at the sky
 
 

Author Notes
Loop Poetry is a poetry form. There are no restrictions on the number of stanzas nor on the syllable count for each line. In each stanza, the last word of the first line becomes the first word of line two, last word of line 2 becomes the first word of line 3, ... and so on. Originally it's a rhymed poem but mine is free verse.

Thank you very much for your time and kind review.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. The presentation and poem created by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 12/5/24

     

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