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Oh, You Are Sure, Are You by bob cullen
Oh, you are... are you? writing prompt entry

Oh, you are sure, are you? Are you positively sure?
Have you thought this through? Do you need to think some more?
Considered ev'ry thought, maybe just one more check an' look,
'Member once the kitchen's closed, can't change how food's cooked.
 
Oh, you are sure, are you? he'll never change your mind?
How can you be so sure? What happens if you find?
A new dress in a Cole's store, cheaper than this one
T'is it better goin' round dressed up like a Nun.
 
Oh, you are sure, are you, it's not to late to change,
It was fun an' easy, when ridin' on the range.
And here there's no rustler's, or bad guy's with a gun,
Lots of cattle grazin', an' days of summer's sun. 
 
Oh, you are sure, are you, maybe you need to think
Don't be too impulsive, take time an' sip one more drink
Take time to sit an ponder, can't alter what has past
Ain't 'nuff time to think 'bout, time's runnin' out so fast
 
Oh, you are sure, are you, it's today, can't delay.
Today's the day, our big pay, time's really slippin' away. 
Cheerin' on our women, the best things in our lives
Our mother's, our sister's, our daughter's and our wives
 
Oh, you are sure, are you, do you think that is wise
To glance back on days gone by, through another's eyes
Will we find truth, peace of mind, will confusion reign
Will it bring on new freedom, or free our troubled brain
 
 
 


Writing Prompt
Write a humorous free verse or free style poem about YOU, as though you are talking to yourself! Recommended (but not required) that you start every stanza (except your last stanza) with "You are..." . You may start your last stanza with whatever you choose. Your poem can be of any length and genre.

     

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