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Creation In Distress by jim vecchio
What A Mess! writing prompt entry

Creation-in distress!
That woman caused a mess!
He did not give a hoot
Till Eve gave him the fruit
 
The Evil one did press
Creation in distress!
Eve listened to his word
A curse to us is hurled
 
There’s no turning back now
Adam’s now behind a plow
Creation in distress!
Eve clips lambs for her dress
 
We must work, then we die
Dare you now ask God why?
That woman caused a mess!
Creation in distress!


Writing Prompt
Write a poem about a mess! As long as your poem is about making a mess, or encorporates the topic of messes, anything goes. Creative approaches are welcomed. Contest voters will be asked to consider the topic when making a choice for a winner. Now let's get sloppy!

     

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