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Gogyohka Poem
2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
: The Last Kiss by Gypsy Blue Rose
dedicated to men and women who sacrifice their lives for freedom

the last kiss

before battle

lingers in my mouth

with a taste of grief and sacrifice

for our country’s freedom

 

 

Author Notes
this poem could be about any war around the world

Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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