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2024 Gypsy's Free Verse
: I Lost Her by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

my voice sought the wind

to reach her

but she belongs to another

 

 

her voice, her body, her eyes 

linger dormant in my heart

telling myself I don’t love her 

 

 

it’s true

our love didn’t last 

and after time it died

 

 

we forgot 

the way our bodies

intertwined

 

 

because on nights like this 

with her body next to mine

she trembled in my arms

 

 

now all that remains

are dying embers and emptiness

~ I lost her ~

 

 

Author Notes
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. It's inspired by Pablo Neruda poetry. I write from a man's point of view, just to try something different.

Gypsy

pictures from my Pinterest account

     

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