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Crescendo Poem.
Dandelions by Sanku
Artwork by suzannethompson2 at FanArtReview.com


Dancing dandelions
dressed in yellow liveries
proudly carry summer's banners.
Trooping over the fields and road sides,
they blithely entreat us to blow their fluff.
'Close your eyes and make your wish', they seem to say.
Like dancing dervishes, puff balls float up the sky.
But wishes fall flat, lie buried in the Mother Earth's lap.

 


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Crescendo poem .8 lines with an increase of one syllable per line-6/7/8/9/10/11/12/13.
Thank you suzannethompson2 for this art work
People make a wish while blowing the fluffy heads..
Last line is my cynical self!

     

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