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pessimistic attitude born from poor experiences
fools optimism by emmabs
Minute Poetry Contest contest entry

fools optimistic ideals 

loves judge appeals  

safety forlorn    

pessimisms born 

isolations a blessing  

never pressing  

Is love just pain? 

disguised with gain 

 

illogically we crave this 

desires amiss 

take the warning

avoid mourning

Author Notes
Hi! this is my first poem I'm submitting. it is based around the idea of someone experiencing the loss of some form of love, and becoming very pessimistic as the result!

     

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