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: Walking Creamer's Field by ~Dovey
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With birds, hope springs eternal,
as April brings longer days.
Walk a mile with me today;
snow and puddles, splattering,

hear a squirrel chattering,
see snow buntings fluttering,
in flight, four swans mustering,
Canada geese clustering,

pussy willows rustling,
and an eagle circling prey.
As April brings longer days,
with birds, hope springs eternal.

4/10/24


Author Notes
Pictures from my walk today. My growing hope for Spring.

ECLIPSE POEM - This is a form I created which focuses on imagery and motion. It is one image crossing over another image. Cross rhyme, onomatopoeia, and double entendre are additional elements that are encouraged.

There are three quatrains and the lines are seven syllables each. The rhyme pattern is: ABbc cccc cbBA (The capital letters are refrain lines.)

I hope you enjoy this style.

Kim

     

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