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Contemporary Haiku for the Haiku club
2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Mountain Top
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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on the mountain top,
my fears cower
at God's feet —
I let them go
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Author Notes
I was worried about something today and I an trying to let God take care it. There's peace in letting go.
Contemporary Haiku is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection.The most common literary adaptation in English of haiku looks something like this: one to four lines, no strict syllable count but brief. These poems too utilize a caesura (dash before satori). Images need not be taken from nature, though they may be and often are. Seasonality is optional, though often featured. Here's an example:
in the woodpile
the broken ax handle
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Gypsy
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