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#8 - NaPoWriMo 2024 - a love that grew
Love is in the Air
: Solemn Vow by Ginda Simpson

How

I knew

love so new

would last like this

and remain strong and true

that we would discover such bliss

from holding hands and our first tender kiss

with two bands of gold we made a most solemn vow

in good times, and bad, in health, and now this

good health, it seems, has gone amiss

your strength does not fail you

nor faith dismiss

our love grew

we knew

how

 


Author Notes
My 8th poem for NaPoWriMo 2024. This is my first Diatelle. The syllable structure of the diatelle is as follows: 1/2/3/4/6/8/10/12/10/8/6/4/3/2/1, but unlike an ethere, has a set rhyme pattern of abbcbccaccbcbba.

     

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