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Lovers on a walk, with hopes for the future.
Under a Starry Sky by HarryT
Sedoka Poem writing prompt entry

 
When walking with you
Gentle music in my soul
Hope it will be forever

When holding your hand
I too hear music playing
Yes, our love is forever
 


Writing Prompt
Write a sedoka poem. A sedoka consists of two unrhymed three-line stanzas, each with a syllable count of 5 - 7 - 7.
Often these stanzas go at the same subject from different perspectives, but that is not a requirement.

Author Notes
First stanza is lover number one. Second stanza is lover number two's answer.

     

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