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Gogyohka Poem
2023 Gypsy's Tanka
: The Day is Dying by Gypsy Blue Rose
poem in black font in my author notes

 
 

the day is dying

and dusk is 'round the bend

but don’t be weary, my love,

I’ll be with you till the end

rest deeply in my embrace

 
 
 

Author Notes
the day is dying
and dusk is 'round the bend
but donā??t be weary, my love,
Iā??ll be with you till the end
rest deeply in my embrace

Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation." - Kahlil Gibran

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