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Gogyohka Poem Suite
2023 Gypsy's Tanka
: Mother Nature's Lullaby by Gypsy Blue Rose



 
you think the morning breeze

caresses your face

and butterflies tickle your hands

but it's me asking you to dance

while the sunrise warms our hearts
 

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author Notes
Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia

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Gypsy

     

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