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crimson dawn is breaking
and the lazy sun is waking
shining on you
as you get up in paradise
we share the same sky
I bask in the midday sun
tangled in last night's dreams
and lingering earthy musk
of Mother Nature's bouquet
amidst all creatures close and far
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Author Notes
"Ever has it been that love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation." - Kahlil Gibran
crimson dawn is breaking
and the lazy sun is waking
shining on you
as you get up in paradise
we share the same sky
I bask in midday sun
tangled in last night�????�???�??�?�¢??s dreams
and lingering earthy musk
of Mother Nature�????�???�??�?�¢??s bouquet
amidst all creatures close and far
Gogyohka is a five-line free-style Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. Any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay but never rhyme. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. === source = writers digest ===source=wikipedia
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