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That Year by kiwisteveh
Sonnet Poetry Contest contest entry

 
On January's snowy streets I found
 
this broken bird with eye as cold as ice.
 
Though friends all shook their heads and family frowned,
 
I took you in against all good advice
 
 
In love, or what seemed love, we found our joy
 
and shrugged off any thought of debt to pay
 
for careless passion treated as a toy;
 
the spring and summer fluttered fast away.
 
 
In grey October, as the cold winds blew
 
and autumn leaves turned streets to tattered gold
 
your thoughts grew distant, off in climes anew,
 
imprisoned in a cage that could not hold.
 
 
December came; your bars you smashed apart.
 
On freedom's wings you flew  -  and broke my heart.
 
 

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Author Notes
I know you recognise that any decent reader will skim the extra syllable in 'family' to maintain the iambic meter...

     

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