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5-7-5 and Haiku
Leaves fall by Sanku
Artwork by VMarguarite at FanArtReview.com

5-7-5 poem


Leaves fly up and down
dancing to the west wind's tune~
rustling strains echo.

HAIKU

Leaves do not grieve
when wind flings them in autumn ~
nature seeks joy



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Author Notes
I have tried to make show distinction between the two forms..not sure I succeeded...
Thank you VMarguarite for this art work

     

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