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Free Verse for the Contest
One Thousand Cranes
: Ebbing Tide by Gypsy Blue Rose
Free Verse Poem contest entry

 
 
the ebbing tide
pulls you away from me
and into the sea
yet we share the same
ocean breeze


the possibility still exists
of love to arise
so my heart trembles
at the thought of missing our hello
makes me panic and wonder
what I would say


for so long
I have watched you from afar
night after night
I dream of you and me
on my bed ablaze
as we make love
in the dark


our breath a raging storm
electrified
and although there's no thunder
our heartbeats boom and bang

 
 
 
 

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FREE VERSE is an open form of poetry that does not use meter patterns and rhyme patterns. It thus tends to follow the rhythm of natural speech.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

     

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