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When too much Cyberspace and Technology take over
Chronic Cyberspace by Debi Pick Marquette
Minute Poetry writing prompt entry



Some want to live in cyberspace

Without a face

No longer speak

And body's weak


When all you need are hands and brains

Your system strains

Your strength is gone

A life withdrawn


Don't live your whole life from a chair

Come up for air

So fight the fight

Or stand to write
 


Writing Prompt
Write a Minute Poem. The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff. See an example and more details in the announcement.

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Author Notes
I have seen young kids that don't come up for air, because they are too addicted to cyberspace. Statistics prove that it can cause obesity, weakened immune systems and nervous system and muscle damage. Not to mention loss of real life they miss out on.

     

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