Warning: The author has noted that this contains the highest level of language.
Well here goes my first post on here.....
"You better stop and look,
Lift up your head from reading your fucking hobbit book,
I did the job some help from God it took,
We started to bond he led me over yond by the pond and brook,
A spear flew by my head by the spirit I was led
And everyone that looked on it shook,
I'd hate to get robbed got to be honest crook,
You should get another job I've had a weapon all along but you didn't give it at all a look"
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Author Notes
I'm just looking for feedback and criticism I have thousands of poems I've written and would honestly like to hear people's opinions on what I â??write
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