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The Beauties Of Nature by pookietoo
Show us Your Early Poetry Vol. 3 writing prompt entry

Every day I look out and see
The beauties of nature each day brings.
The sky is blue; the grass is green.
I often hear the birds sing.

There are beautiful flowers in people's yards --
Daffodils, pansies, and lilies too.
When people water them, they bloom.
They are purple, yellow, pink, and blue.

After it rains, a pretty rainbow appears.
Red, yellow, and blue are the colors you see.
I enjoy looking at the sunset.
At times it is as pretty as it can be.

I love to watch the birds
As they fly in the shape of a "v".
How wonderful it is to see all of the animals
Roam on the land or swim on the sea.

We really do live in a beautiful world.
I am so grateful for this.
If the earth didn't have such beautiful things,
The world we live in would really be amiss.


Writing Prompt
Share with us one of your oldest pieces of poetry, exactly as you wrote it. It doesn?t need to be your earliest work - just something old enough that you can see your progression as a writer. I want to see all those excessive ellipses, capitals at the start of every line, the abundance of semicolons, the pretentious repetition, the unnecessary line spaces that are.....

SO.....

IMPORTANT....

to my art!

I want you to swear on your honour you won't edit it before posting (adding an image is allowed, as we're in Fanstory Land). Other than that, no limitations.

Previous entrants are more than welcome, but remember these must be pieces you haven?t shared previously on Fanstory. Go digging in your old school notebooks with random scribblings in them - find us something fun and interesting!

     

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