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Build Castles by the Sea
Heart Crafted Poems -2021
: Come Live with Me by JLR

Come live with me and be my love
my wife you'd be, come now my dove
to fit you like a hand to glove
proclaim true love, you be my love.

We'd watch the waves roll in roll out
Toward the breeze we would loud shout
as the rain squalls gush through the spout
get wet from waves roll in roll out

When Sun rays warm the sandy shore
Castles of sand that you'd adore
I'd build complete with parquet floors
Our child can crawl on sandy shores.

So have I made my plea to thee
as clear, precise as needs to be?
That 'tis your sweet ripe lips I see
so make me glad, my plea to thee!

I will cherish the day we wed
on your heart I will not dare tread!

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Author Notes
Potlatch Poetry Club Challenge December 31 at 9:29PM >>
~ Roger's Refrain ~
* written in iambic tetrameter
*Any number of mono-rhyme quatrain stanzas
* ends with rhyming couplet

*It is stanzaic, with quatrains, EACH stanza being mono-rhymed with the last half of line one, being the repeated refrain, as the last half of line 4.

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