General Poetry posted January 12, 2025


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Flirting and success

Is it you I disown?

by EILEEN LAW

Walking on the street she blows by

Golden hair and perfume im the air

Silk scarf brushes my face 

and causes my pause

Instant need to know her more

I turn to see her smile

Was that the invite I looked for?

Towards her I stide with confidence

Unfounded in history

She lifts her fingers to wave me in

My heart beats

Just as I reach her Side I see

her reach for the man beside me




Failure writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a free verse poem about failure. No rhyming patterns.


From the mans perspective, I hope
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