General Poetry posted June 4, 2023


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Double Refrain Kyrielle for Potlatch Poetry

That Soothing Sound

by damommy

While sitting in the garden shade,
I hear the buzz of honeybees.
As they check every bloom and blade,
I watch as breezes stir the trees.
 
Their busyness apparent when
I hear the buzz of honeybees.
Just where, I wonder, have they been.
I watch as breezes stir the trees.
 
This lazy, hazy afternoon
I hear the buzz of honeybees.
While listening to a songbird’s tune,
I watch as breezes stir the trees.
 
In special times of summer days,
I hear the buzz of honeybees,
and sitting in a drowsy daze,
I watch as breezes stir the trees.
 
What joy they bring me on the days
I hear the buzz of honeybees.
Still here I sit - they flew away.
I watch as breezes stir the trees.



Poem of the Month contest entry

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Double Refrain Kyrielle is an American invented variation of the Kyrielle found at Poetry Base attributed to the Dread Poet Roberts. As the name implies it adds a 2nd refrain.
- stanzaic, any number of quatrains is written at the discretion of the poet.
- syllabic, each line is 8 syllables. In English it is often written in iambic tetrameter.
- written with 2 refrains.
- rhymed, aB1aB2 cB1cB2 dB1dB2 etc., B1 and B2 are rhymed refrains.


Club entry for the "~ Double Refrain Kyrielle ~ week of 6-3-2023" event in "Put Pen To Paper Potlatch Poetry Club".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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