General Poetry posted May 28, 2023


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5-7-5 and Haiku

Leaves fall

by Sanku

5-7-5 poem


Leaves fly up and down
dancing to the west wind's tune~
rustling strains echo.

HAIKU

Leaves do not grieve
when wind flings them in autumn ~
nature seeks joy



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