General Poetry posted May 19, 2022


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No No No No No

by Debi Pick Marquette

my mom asked me to go to our nearby grocery store
at eight years old, I went alone and entered the front door

I looked around, but no one there, they must have been in back
I was amazed to see all of the candy on the rack

temptation hit my little brain, and who would ever know?
then I heard this little voice, say "no no no no no!"

raised with three brothers, I caught many frogs and snakes
in the sun I'd bake mud pies, that's what a tomboy makes

my brother and I were in the house throwing a football
he accidentally threw too hard, and we heard something fall

an antique of my dad's, who we've heard his temper blow
both tempted to tell a lie, but that voice said no no no

when I was a teenager, I was shopping with a friend
she found a shirt; and it was more than what she had to spend

she put it in her bag and as she started to walk out
I told her it was wrong, of that I had no doubt

she said she knew that I was right, as her guilt started to show
she said she heard her conscience say"no no no no no no!"

I ask God to guide my path and always keep me meek
I know that going for seven days without Him makes one weak

last night I met this handsome man who's giving me that look
I fell for him completely, as we kissed my body shook

I could not fight temptation; then I start to wake up slow
Thankfully it was just a dream, but still a no No NO!"



Temptation Poetry writing prompt entry
Writing Prompt
Write a poem any style or length that deals with any aspect of the topic, 'Temptation'.

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