| General Fiction posted February 13, 2022 |
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Winning the race
In God's Eyes
by Begin Again
Devon heard his dad's demanding voice. "Bicycling done. Running done. Swimming and we're done."
"Please, Dad. I can't."
"No son of mine quits."
One mile offshore, his competitors pulled away. Exhausted, Devon inhaled and felt his body sink. Tiny bubbles rose to the surface.
Through the bright lights, his soul lifted into the heavens. God smiled, proclaiming Devon the winner.
60 WORD DASH writing prompt entry
Devon heard his dad's demanding voice. "Bicycling done. Running done. Swimming and we're done."
"Please, Dad. I can't."
"No son of mine quits."
One mile offshore, his competitors pulled away. Exhausted, Devon inhaled and felt his body sink. Tiny bubbles rose to the surface.
Through the bright lights, his soul lifted into the heavens. God smiled, proclaiming Devon the winner.
"Please, Dad. I can't."
"No son of mine quits."
One mile offshore, his competitors pulled away. Exhausted, Devon inhaled and felt his body sink. Tiny bubbles rose to the surface.
Through the bright lights, his soul lifted into the heavens. God smiled, proclaiming Devon the winner.
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Writing Prompt Tell a complete story using 60 words or under. |
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